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P**K
Great book
I really liked this book I can't wait to see where the author takes the story I will definitely read the next book
K**R
Relly interesting
I like the book and story, (though sometimes it did seem to drag in my opinion.) I also really enjoyed how it merged into the Divine dungeon series and how some questions I had were solved.
T**O
AWESOME
Loved every bit of this book. Pair with dungeon eternium for full effect of the story so looking forward to catching up.
K**R
Love Dakota Krout!
This one was the worst of all the awesome Krout books for one reason. Exposition! Ouch!!!Exposition makes for dull heavy confusing nonsensical reading. I'm willing to give a nod to made up magic theory, when it makes even a little bit of sense. This book, unfortunately spent a good 60% of its content on exposition that made nearly no sense at all. Please! Please! Please! Edit out the stupid nonsensical garbage, every explanation ended with, "oh well, i guess thats just how it is." Please skip the stupid and jump right to the, "that's just how it is." For Pete's sake its already a make believe world, we get it! I know for a fact that the authors couldn't explain everything twice with out reference notes, and even then they'd be confused after trying to compare them. Please dont waste another 200 pages on confusing exposition. It has nothing to do with the story. Nothing. I love make believe and magic and make believe magic. This caused my heart to hurt on your behalf. Learn from it. Exposition is BAD writing! Especially when it doesn't make sense. Here's hoping i wont have similar feelings at the end of Acme. Fingers crossed. Which ever one of you wrote the most exposition in these should forfeit your royalties to some charity that supports literacy as restitution. Very painful. Please do better. Cut, edit, leave the nonsensical expo on the proverbial cutting room floor. Thx
R**Y
enjoyable
Fun tale of fluff that is now past the ending of the divine dungeon series. Artorian is just an incredibly fun character to read.
L**.
Long on exposition, a bit late on action.
First of all I enjoy the storyline of this book.Love the main character and his Besty. in fact you could give Dawn her own series. The main character and her interaction are quite touching and quite lovely. my only complaint is too much exposition, explaining how mana works, explaining how other things work delving into the MC‘s analytical processes, we bit too much. don’t get me wrong I love how he analyze this way out of certain situations but some of the Book gets bogged down with too much Manusia. Still a worthy read going on to read the next one in the series
A**M
Nice Back Story
Enjoyed most of the story. The rehash of the necromancer battle was a bit meh. Really looking forward to the creation of the world. Gotta force myself to ignore Deus Ex Mary Sue. Seems a staple of the genre. The immediate splitting of every group unanimously was a bit quick but many do seem to hate each other. Would have liked some of them to opt for paradise. Maybe we will have a continent where people like the dwarves and Artorians crew choose to get along.
J**M
fun series
This is a good book. You shouldy read it. I like the story. The characters are fun. The book is a good read. i enjoyed it alot.. Download or buy it today. why not?
S**D
Full of holes
The characters and world are fun, I love the prose. But the story and plot are so full of holes and structure it ruins it. I can only hope this is the result of trying to match up this series to the OG divine dungeon series. The first book was good but it's been downhill since. I can only hope it's better after this
K**R
Chaos
This is not a good book, clearly. The authors jump around without a clear plan and I think expect us to have read the Divine Dungeon series. I have only read up to book 3, because the ending was in my opinion definite and didn't need any further books.The story is nearly incoherent and only mindless fans would give this 5 stars.This has no right to be as highly rated as it is.
R**S
Enjoyable
A good read that brought together the 3 worlds of Artorian, Cal & Joe.... Interested to see where the next Artorian story will take us.
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